Worker 11811 Posted April 22, 2008 Share Posted April 22, 2008 Hey everybody! I just posted a new fur story at Literotica.com and it went on line today! Check it out! http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=361615 As usual, your votes and commentary is appreciated! T.I.A. BTW: If you want to read more of my fur stories on Literotica, check out this link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=675517&page=submissions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ew19975 Posted April 24, 2008 Share Posted April 24, 2008 Very inventive tale there, worker; a nice read. I have enjoyed your various stories, and thank you for writing them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thursdayfullcollapse Posted April 24, 2008 Share Posted April 24, 2008 That it's entirely in the second person becomes really wearing pretty quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worker 11811 Posted April 24, 2008 Author Share Posted April 24, 2008 I appreciate that, thursday. I was initially torn over the decision whether to write it as a first person or or second person story. I have had several people tell me to do it that way but I have resisted up until now. I initially wrote it the other way but, the night before I posted it, I changed it. To be honest, I'm not 100% satisfied with the way it came out. It's "good" but not "great." I think I might rewrite it and repost it. I appreciate the feedback. It really does help! Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 28, 2008 Share Posted April 28, 2008 Short but very interesting ..kind of funny at that. OFF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worker 11811 Posted April 28, 2008 Author Share Posted April 28, 2008 What is it? The work-a-day drudgery references that are funny? The surly postal workers? The Checkpoint Charlie reference? Do you think I should change the story to third person? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 28, 2008 Share Posted April 28, 2008 Hell no! It's very personal. There's only one actor!! Second or third person makes no sense. Some of those writers at literotica get so obsessed over trivia sometimes it's maddening. Left a note and vote blasting the nay sayers. I've almost completed rewriting all my stories to first person and present tense. To me the deadliest of story writing sins is to put it in past tense when it is clearly unfolding in the present. Literotica is full of them. Takes the edge off. OFF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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